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Thursday 26 May 2016

THE THR33 LITTLE PIGS

          Three little  pigs

One stormy night three little baby pigs were born.
As time went on the pigs grew taller and hairier.
One day the mother pig got sick of cancer they had to move out of the small house.The three little pigs moved out and they had to find their own house, one little pig found rocks and straw.one shiney day a big bad bull came and the bull was hungry so he went to the 1st pig and nocked on his door “who is it!” said the little pig “it's shaun the bull,can i come in”said the bull “NO!”said the pig “go away”he said, “then i’ll have to run down your rockey house, and so he did.The next little pig found some wood so he decided to build himself a wooden house ,soon when he finished he went in and sat on his wooden bed,later on that day  the bull came buy and he was still hungry so he knocked on the little pigs house ¨who is it?¨said the little pig ,¨it's shaun the bull ,¨he said ¨can i come in and have a cup of tea?¨said the bull,¨NO!¨said the little pig¨go away!¨ said the pig ¨then i'll have to run down your house so he did and the little pig ran into the jungle and while he was running he bumped into his brother and the both ran and ran until they reached their other brother in his huge house made out of  glass, all three pigs hid inside of the glass house but the bull  found them and he was really hungry now so he decided to not ask but just to run over the glass house so he did and when he did he cut himself with a tiny piece of glass “hahaahaha!”said the three little pig and they all live happy ever after.

6 comments:

  1. Hi Ronald
    This is a really cool story. I like the ending, it was quite funny.
    Regards Zara

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  2. Hi Ronald
    This is a really cool story. I like the ending, it was quite funny.
    Regards Zara

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  3. Hey Ronald
    your story was really awesome my favorite part was the ending because it was funny.

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  4. Hey Ronald, I really enjoyed this story, but have you thought about mixing it up, like some 1 simple, 1 compound and then 1 complex, then you mix it up through the story? Apart from that this story is great

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  5. Hello Ronald. I'm Reilly. I really like the twist that you made on the three little pigs. The the funniest part is how the bull ran into the house. What story would you change next?

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  6. hi i like your three little pigs story i made one bum mine inset as good

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