MY PASSION PROJECT

A moment in time

While I'm jogging I see in the far distant a hot dog stand.as I got close to the hot dog stand I pulled out of my pocket some money. “Yum” I can smell the yummy hot dogs. as I walk up to the hot dog stand I look for the price it’s 2$ I say passing the money to the shopkeeper,wait a while says the shopkeeper as he fries the hot dog.I walk up to him to grab my hot dog  ,as I grab it I start to walk off and eat my hot dog “yum!”.

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