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Wednesday 12 October 2016

Social connection

    I am posting this blog post because we are doing our inquiry on social connection(people that are close to you or not close to you).

Thursday 26 May 2016

THE THR33 LITTLE PIGS

          Three little  pigs

One stormy night three little baby pigs were born.
As time went on the pigs grew taller and hairier.
One day the mother pig got sick of cancer they had to move out of the small house.The three little pigs moved out and they had to find their own house, one little pig found rocks and straw.one shiney day a big bad bull came and the bull was hungry so he went to the 1st pig and nocked on his door “who is it!” said the little pig “it's shaun the bull,can i come in”said the bull “NO!”said the pig “go away”he said, “then i’ll have to run down your rockey house, and so he did.The next little pig found some wood so he decided to build himself a wooden house ,soon when he finished he went in and sat on his wooden bed,later on that day  the bull came buy and he was still hungry so he knocked on the little pigs house ¨who is it?¨said the little pig ,¨it's shaun the bull ,¨he said ¨can i come in and have a cup of tea?¨said the bull,¨NO!¨said the little pig¨go away!¨ said the pig ¨then i'll have to run down your house so he did and the little pig ran into the jungle and while he was running he bumped into his brother and the both ran and ran until they reached their other brother in his huge house made out of  glass, all three pigs hid inside of the glass house but the bull  found them and he was really hungry now so he decided to not ask but just to run over the glass house so he did and when he did he cut himself with a tiny piece of glass “hahaahaha!”said the three little pig and they all live happy ever after.

Friday 8 April 2016

A moment in time

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While I'm jogging I see in the far distant a hot dog stand.as I got close to the hot dog stand I pulled out of my pocket some money. “Yum” I can smell the yummy hot dogs. as I walk up to the hot dog stand I look for the price it’s 2$ I say passing the money to the shopkeeper,wait a while says the shopkeeper as he fries the hot dog.I walk up to him to grab my hot dog  ,as I grab it I start to walk off and eat my hot dog “yum!”.
Success Criteria:
Peer:
Self:
  • Present Tense
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  • Intro, body, conclusion
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  • Descriptive detail
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Tuesday 15 March 2016

Success Criteria

Learning Intention:
Use dialogue in our writing.


Success Criteria:
Self
Peer
  1. Speech marks.


  1. The correct punctuation.


  1. Start a new line when someone else is talking.




Your task is to write a dialogue between the two men in the picture above. Use the clues in the picture to give you an idea of what they could be talking about.


At the floating market a man named kunta goes up to a man named Yoza, kunta says “How much are your food?”
5 dollars,”said Yoza.
Ok, i’ll buy one bag” said kunta giving the money to yoza.
“Have a good day!” Shouted Yoza to kunta.
“Thanks,”said Kunta.
“That was my first sell of the day,”said yoza.
“Here comes another one to buy my food,” says Yoza.
“Hi,” said simba as he quickly walks over.
“Can i have one of these and one of those and this one please,”said Simba.
“Ok,”said yoza.
“It will be five dollars,”said yoza.
“WHAT!!”said simba
“I only have one dollar,”said simba.
“Then go a away,” said yoza.
“GET OUT OF HERE!”said yoza.

     

Monday 7 March 2016

Book Cover

I picked this because we were making a cover about the book we read in our groups.

Wednesday 17 February 2016

Failing is good

The reflection I got from this video is that people make mistakes in life like failing , failing is is like being stuck in the learning pit but keep trying you will adventurously get out.
https://vimeo.com/117364809

Bad Choises

i pick this because it helps you  tell the teacher not sending thing back

Monday 15 February 2016

Welcome


Welcome to my new learning blog, this is where I will be sharing my new learning with you. I would love to receive your comments and feedback on my work.